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Nas (mentor)
The overall appearance of the blog looks good, the background has a camera pattern which is media related. the animation on the header does not work. Student can improve this by adding animation. The unit work is clear and has images. videos are also added and shows animation used.
Steve (tutor)
The overall blog has a media feel about it with appropriate imagery. The imagery is designed as a pattern for the background and a film camera for the header. The header is animated as a gif (which the tutor has seen but is not working on the blog at the moment. There are plenty of pictures on the blog that makes the pages look interesting and engaging.
i really like the background of your blog and the animation of the header was created good.
i was pleased with the ideas of the work and alsoit was organised okay.
Things that went well
I was pleased with the ideas I had for the blog to make it interesting.
Making the images and designs went went and I was able to use the pictures elsewhere.
It was fairly simple and straighforward to follow the instructions to make the blog look good.
Things that could be improved
The animation on the header is no longer working. I can upload the gif again.
I could have used more colour in the designs to make the blog more striking.
I need to keep better notes and make sure all the posts have titles and labels. This will make finding work easier.
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